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Evora Blake
is 91% done
All of the relationships are rushed. And how do they go from wary but admiring comrades (which is understandable), with a smile here and there, to suddenly getting married? Why is marriage even a thought when exactly zero courting has happened? I can see wanting some form of commitment with the person you realize you care deeply about but that doesn't need to skip five steps and rush straight into marriage.
— Aug 19, 2015 03:32PM
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Evora Blake
is 43% done
The characters are intriguing but the writing style is convoluted. Skimming over excessive detail helps but there is so much overdeveloped alien technology that it is very easy to get lost. Complicated unnecessary details are explained while simple details that would better set the scene are ignored. I will admit the authors' imaginations are glorious but they let that overshadow the plot and the characters.
— Aug 18, 2015 09:36PM
Evora Blake
is 43% done
The characters are intriguing but the writing style is convoluted. Skimming over excessive detail helps but there is so much overdeveloped alien technology that it is very easy to get lost. Complicated unnecessary details are explained while simple details that would better set the scene are ignored. I will admit the authors' imaginations are glorious but they let that overshadow the plot and the characters. Very fru
— Aug 18, 2015 04:37PM
