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Sunny
is reading
I like the story, but the odd use of italics is distracting, pulling me from the story way too often. It's irritating.
— Aug 20, 2015 06:26AM
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Sunny
is 55% done
Big pet peeve of mine..."cry like a girl" or any variation thereof. Another character called him on it, but it continues to be a thing and it's affecting the MC's likeability for me.
— Aug 20, 2015 06:50AM
