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Viddy is on page 91 of 419
Lots of odd phrasing out of place for the moment. "A shiver spider-walked down my spine" without reference to arachnids. "A breeze set the branches rustling, a waterfall of white petals flittering down like snow" when it's supposed to be springtime, so why are leaves falling? Odd word choice that seems to be chosen for aesthetics sounds rather than meaning.
Dec 09, 2023 03:46AM
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Viddy is on page 369 of 419
Lame second trial. Pull one of three levers.
Dec 11, 2023 05:32AM
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Viddy
Viddy is on page 357 of 419
"bowels turned watery" for the third time this book.
What's this supposed to mean?
Dec 11, 2023 04:38AM
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Viddy
Viddy is on page 275 of 419
Feyra goes home, family is rich beyond belief, Nesta couldn't be glamoured so she knows the truth. Cool character change with Nesta and Elain. However, very short lived and pages later Feyra somehow finds a way back to Spring Court? Show, don't tell...
Dec 11, 2023 12:31AM
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Viddy
Viddy is on page 248 of 419
"Who wants someone around who's so covered in thorns?"
"Thorns?"
"Thorny. Prickly. Sour. Contrary."

This seems so forced, like when a movie character says the name of the film. Out of the blue.

The only previous mention of this was chapters ago where Feyra gets pricked by a rose thorn and bleeds, then Tamlin heals her with magic, removes the thorns, and puts the dethorned rose in her hair.
Dec 10, 2023 11:27PM
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Viddy
Viddy is on page 112 of 419
SPOILER: Tamlin learns Feyre can't read, so he shows her his "enormous, opulent study. Tomes lined each wall like the soldiers of a silent army..." He's gonna teach her!
However, if this book is written from first-person illiterate Feyre's perspective, why such flowery language? How? It's present tense, so even a transcription of her thoughts doesn't make sense with a rugged life devoid of literacy.
Dec 09, 2023 04:39AM
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