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Sophia Barsuhn
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Quite suddenly, the pacing got better, there was less filler and I got a sense of what the countryside looked like. Don't worry; I also keep track of what I like about your books, M.J., because there are definitely good things.
— Dec 09, 2023 01:21PM
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Sophia Barsuhn
is on page 268 of 298
Really not a good look when the one non-white character in your book is the villain.
— Dec 11, 2023 11:39AM
Sophia Barsuhn
is on page 32 of 298
Oh, the editing and proofreading! The introduction of Maddie is causing me physical pain. Again, I'm sorry, because there is a good book hiding in here (as with all of M.J. Evans' books), but this needed so much work.
— Dec 06, 2023 10:22AM
Sophia Barsuhn
is on page 5 of 298
I'm on the very first page of the very first chapter and am already finding things to fix. Denny Dressman, I'm sure that you were an excellent journalist and writer of nonfiction, but your editing and proofreading skills could use some work. I'm not saying this is bad, but it could be a lot better.
— Dec 04, 2023 07:46AM
