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With writing more I have less reading time. But, this book is now filling in the gaps in an enjoyable way.
— Jul 29, 2011 09:31AM
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Steve
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These last chapters are quite enticing. If only the first half of this book was such a pleasure to read. Though I understand why Brett had to get Jardir's character formed 'first'. It would have been wrong to put it in later, it would have detracted from the story. But, too damn much Jardir in the beginning.
— Aug 01, 2011 10:40AM
Steve
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It is sooooo good to be out of the desert. I couldn't help but feel that ove 200 pages were taken up on an area I felt 50 pages would have sufficed. Two words come to mind; 'Major Edit!'
— Jul 27, 2011 11:27AM
Steve
is on page 207 of 578
Okaaay, and we're still in the bloody desert *smiling* (yes, I'm aware of the title *laughing*). We've (me & the voices in my head) just had Jardir's version of events up to leaving Arlen in the desert to die. Even though this DID happen in the last book! We now get 200 pages of Jardir's detailed version. Hopefully, our hero will be joining the book sometime soon!
— Jul 18, 2011 06:50PM
Steve
is on page 121 of 578
Okaaay, we're still in the desert (bugger!) with Jardir and his version of 'THINGS THAT HAPPENED IN THE LAST BOOK!' *Laughing* I want to know more about Arlen, Leesha, and if he returns to the city where he left his friends and new family! Come on! ;)
— Jul 15, 2011 11:59AM
Steve
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I've been looking forward to reading this book since finishing 'The Painted Man'!
— Jul 12, 2011 07:04AM
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This is on the TBR list!
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Hi Kim, TBR? Times Book Review? It wouldn't surprise me, it's an original concept with some well written characters. Too much Jardir, too little Arlen, in this book though (IMO) ;)
:) To be read . . . :) I met Peter at World Con in Melbourne last year. He's great! I have heard that (too much Jardir and not enough Arlen) We'll compare notes when I've caught up!
LOL @ TBR ;)I like his originality. Also, he does a good blend of strong male and female characters. I'll look forward to comparing notes on what you think of this book -x-
