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It’s an interesting read so far but has a mistake. Small spoiler the main character makes an instagram page and hires a new accountant for the book store. Even mentions the amount of followers they now have for said store. Fast forward a week or so, and now she has the flu and while taking a few sick days, she decides to create an ig profile for the store (again!) and the owner hired the account (again).
— Dec 21, 2023 07:34PM
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Victoria
is on page 102 of 294
Another mistake. The main character in the beginning says she’s 25, and then later on she says she’s 26. Not to drag the book but this is why a good editor is important. It may seem like a small detail in the grand scheme of things, but they bother me when important details about the character changes abruptly. the character’s age should stay the same through out the book. Unless there’s a bday
— Dec 21, 2023 07:46PM