Danielle ♥’s Reviews > The Beginning of Never > Status Update

Wait wait wait, they don't speak for months, then she knocks a girl out with a ceramic pencil holder, feels regretful and cries, and now they're kissing??

I am now fully convinced that Lenora is mentally unstable and needs some serious help. She seems like she could use some discipline, and some love, also. I understand Nathan has feelings for her but he's just hurting her by covering for her.

Two paragraphs later and she's completely turned her attitude around! That was quick. Nathan was right all along, just join a group and get to work.

These two characters are dumb. Neither one is successfully communicating with the other. Each conversation leads no where and accomplishes nothing.

Loc 3370 of 3795 - More grammar errors "I and Elisa"

Perfect place to pause and restart I guess because a few months just passed in two sentences ... that was interesting.

Picking this back up, 85% finished, hoping to finish by the end of the month.

Loc 3243 of 3795 - Two apostrophe errors in a row on "Elisa's."

"I'd rather have not tried than be with you and fail."

Loc 3187 of 3795 Okay this is a bit unrealistic. I think if a guy said this to a girl in real life (which is highly unlikely) she'd probably attribute this behavior to him being in the closet.