Hannah’s Reviews > Torkel's Chosen > Status Update
Hannah
is 8% done
2 chapters in, and I’m appreciating the world and character building. I really like the relationship Torkel has with his adoptive mother, and the author did a great job of making you feel bad for Torkel. I’m upset, like I always am, with the money and bribe situation whoever the friend is talking to Faye, and of course I’m aware that’s going to become a huge problem between the two characters in the end.
— Jan 03, 2024 03:31PM
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Hannah
is 74% done
And…I left myself on a cliff hanger, but I need to head to bed!!! Pretty shocking to me that Torkel left Faye in the hands of the slavers for a month, yet after (accidentally) reading a small snippet of the next chapter, I can understand his hesitancy because of her betrayal. I knew that bribe / black mail was going to be a problem. I just hope Torkel will save Faye and Lindsey soon - no more torture!!!
— Jan 04, 2024 12:21AM
Hannah
is 37% done
Definitely enjoying the plot so far. The right amount of “lust” combined with the right amount of “falling in love”. And the kidnapping attempt was unexpected yet really amped up the tension. I’m very nervous about the “formal complaint” about the choosing because of the bribe Faye took. Will that disqualify Torkel and her relationship? When will she tell him???
— Jan 03, 2024 10:38PM
