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LOVE the world building and character arcs/backstories but WHEWWW:

- Our MFC will not stop crying. I get it, its a terrifying world, but would have preferred the author to showcase her distraught emotions instead of a freefall of tears every other page.
- Poor editing. Poor plot points can pull others from their reading bubble, but it's grammatical errors for me and its laden, especially italics consistency.