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Nick Williams
is 13% done
also their infatuation with each other seemed really quick... they're moving pretty fast.
i like the narrators. something about the main actors voices feels very somber, like i'm looking at a monotonous painting which feels fitting for this book...
i think a contrast between the ML and then the deathcast offical would be cool
— Jan 06, 2024 08:30PM
i like the narrators. something about the main actors voices feels very somber, like i'm looking at a monotonous painting which feels fitting for this book...
i think a contrast between the ML and then the deathcast offical would be cool
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Nick Williams
is 19% done
again, i really like how "over the top" orion is. ofc he has valid reason to be "dramatic", his heart condition n everything,, but like the scene of him so sure death cast called him.... i just like tk think it is also due to him being a writer and always caught up in his imagination (lack of better words).
— Jan 08, 2024 08:33AM
Nick Williams
is 13% done
too wordy and repetitive. too on the nose. doesn't let the reader piece it together themself. they gotta tell u exactly what their metaphor meant and how. its annoying
— Jan 06, 2024 08:29PM
Nick Williams
is 13% done
like theres something about the way they talk that makes it read like a wattpad novel (negative). like sentences on sentences of nothing.
bro literally starts talking about a chipped tooth and how he could get it fixed w insurance 💀 (that monologue goes nowhere) ..
— Jan 06, 2024 08:28PM
bro literally starts talking about a chipped tooth and how he could get it fixed w insurance 💀 (that monologue goes nowhere) ..
