north’s Reviews > Dark Moon, Shallow Sea > Status Update
north
is 15% done
Nope this is bad. Great idea, terrible execution. The dialogue is stilted and flat and it just…it’s bad. Twenty minutes after being revived from some kind of cold storage and they are “flirting” and talking about sexualities?
So bad
I really wish people demanded actually well-written LGBT books instead of this dreck.
— Jan 10, 2024 10:04AM
So bad
I really wish people demanded actually well-written LGBT books instead of this dreck.
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north
is 5% done
Not starting out too well. Lots of showing, uneven world building and already a big plot hole ( a thief breaking into a god’s most sacred temple and only has to deal with one guard? What?)
— Jan 10, 2024 09:43AM
