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Kate
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I’ve never seen such overuse of names in dialogue. Every time a character speaks, the other person’s name is given. “Derek, yes thank you. A coffee would be great.” “Tristan, I need to focus on work.” “Alex, I just want to help.” Staaaaaaahp.
— Jan 12, 2024 10:21PM
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Kate
is on page 30 of 345
“It’s clear that you need a break. Why don’t we step out for a bit and grab some lunch? There’s a local sandwich place nearby that makes the best sandwiches. It’ll give us a chance to clear our minds and recharge.”……. Ok I had to actually pause and type this sentence out bc it’s a prime example of why I’m not finishing this book. It’s full of redundancies and unnecessary info. Wtf.
— Jan 12, 2024 09:58PM
Kate
is on page 9 of 345
Ugh. I thought this would be a good one for me. Smutty serial killers and a profiler. Maybe I read too much true crime and actual police procedural novel but the writing of this is god awful. I’m only 9 pages in and maybe it gets better with the smut. But if by page 50 it’s not, this will be a dnf for me.
— Jan 11, 2024 07:29PM
