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The writer keeps telling me and I need her to stop. Show me. Because there's no way a woman would allow that to happen without freaking out and ensuring her own safety. It has to be somewhat believable. All I needed was a, "hey, I really appreciate what you did, but I won't stay here, not unless I can call my -insert name/relation- first." & then the story goes on.....NOPE, this is poorly written. I'm DONE.

The writer keeps telling me and I need her to stop. Show me. Because there's no way a woman would allow that to happen without freaking out and ensuring her own safety. Might sound silly in a short story like this, but it has to be somewhat believable. All I needed was a, "hey, I really appreciate what you did, but I won't stay here, not unless I can call my -insert name/relation- first." & then the story goes on.

The writer keeps telling me and I need her to stop. Show me. Because there's no way a woman would allow that to happen without freaking out and ensuring her own safety. Might sound silly in a show story like this, but it has to be somewhat believable.