Jeff Morford’s Reviews > Book Lovers > Status Update

I'm open to being won over. The author puts so many metaphors and cutesy descriptions in the narrator's internal monologue that it keeps knocking me out of the flow of the story. And then the sister produced paper airplane tickets. I thought I had the time frame wrong. But, then the narrator was working on a phone on the plane. This book just needed a tougher editor.

There are possibly 350 pages to win me back.