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is 45% done
There are a lot of domestic and pointless scenes, it’s very repetitive, all of that combined is making the story feel slow and almost boring, but I also can’t stop reading…
— Jan 15, 2024 10:25PM
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Ann
is 58% done
Might DNF. I am bored and Seven Rue does not write kids realistic or well. Rooney (FMC) feels and talks more mentally young than the 4yr old. The prose feel extremely young and childish and some lines leave a bad taste in my mouth. Normally Seven Rue prose are very stream of conscience and young which is fine for most of her taboo books but it does not mesh well for this story.
— Jan 16, 2024 04:00PM
