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Paragraph two, Sentence one: "being bringing"?
— Sep 23, 2015 10:41PM
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Dorothy Pruett
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Paragraph six, sentence two: There should be "to" or "from" or something, between "back" and "his". It just doesn't sound right to me.
— Sep 23, 2015 10:14PM
Dorothy Pruett
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Paragraph three, sentence six: "I would like improve the aqueduct system." Is he a 2000 generation teentard?
— Sep 21, 2015 10:44PM
