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Melanie
is 42% done
Those truck drivers are either really stupid, totally oblivious, or a combination of both to not get suspicious after that show.
— Sep 26, 2015 02:04PM
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Melanie
is 84% done
I think the sex scenes had more character development than the entire rest of the book thus far.
— Sep 27, 2015 12:01AM
Melanie
is 40% done
I wish Oliver's powers would be explained. Seems like there's some new facet to his talent whenever it's convenient.
— Sep 26, 2015 12:48PM
Melanie
is 18% done
These characters feel very flat and undeveloped. I don't have a reason to care about them.
— Sep 25, 2015 07:13PM

