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Johnny
is 29% done
Some would call this a stroke story.
Beginning was a little rushed. More paragraphs, perhaps an extra chapter or two, would have squeezed out some anticipation and build up, made "the eventual" a more satisfying read.
I've read some of Bella's works on Medium and she's quite good at writing shorter pieces. So looking forward to the rest of this book.
— Jan 21, 2024 07:23AM
Beginning was a little rushed. More paragraphs, perhaps an extra chapter or two, would have squeezed out some anticipation and build up, made "the eventual" a more satisfying read.
I've read some of Bella's works on Medium and she's quite good at writing shorter pieces. So looking forward to the rest of this book.
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Touching lots of kinks and taboos. Bella is not afraid to push boundaries.
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