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So far I am loving this especially compared to the other book by this author I've read, Lavender Tides. His writing style is smoother in this one, with less clunky phrasing. And it's a far more captivating and interesting story than the other book I've read. Still a lot of terminology that is never explained. But better so far than Lavender Tides
— Jan 21, 2024 09:08AM
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Riddle's writing seems to be unpolished at times. But his ideas are captivating which is what keeps me reading. I found Lavender Tides to be mediocre in craft but entertaining enough to continue reading. This book is so far shaping up to be more well crafted. But he still has a tendency to introduce a lot of unexplained terminology with the understanding that the reader will pick it up.
You do. But it is initially pretty frustrating. That said, I find his stories compelling enough to keep going. And they do bring me back to that familiar place in childhood engaging with some of my favorite fantasy worlds. This one just happens to be doing so more successfully in my opinion than Lavender Tides did. But I may be eating my words later.