Bryan’s Reviews > The Maze Runner > Status Update

This is a cool story idea—that needed some drastic oversight on the use of hyperbole and persistently vague descriptive language.
Most sentences are structured: "It was the most (adj.) that he'd ever (v.) in his life."
Quote: "it grew to a crescendo."
Quote: "...instrument-tipped appendages..."
This story could have been much more interesting.