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Raine
is 44% done
Here is an example of the terrible editing errors:
"That makes since but what if he really did want her there?"
Hello!!! Use common "sense" and also commas before "but"s!!!!
I think the people who rated this highly are family of the authors.
Also still boring...
— Oct 06, 2015 03:00PM
"That makes since but what if he really did want her there?"
Hello!!! Use common "sense" and also commas before "but"s!!!!
I think the people who rated this highly are family of the authors.
Also still boring...
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Raine
is 9% done
I'm only 9% into the book and I see so many grammatical errors that I've had to re-read sentences again to understand.
So far the book is freaking boring! I had decided to read it because the rating was so good. I'll keep going for another couple of chapters, but if this continues it will be moved to my DNF shelf.
— Oct 06, 2015 12:44PM
So far the book is freaking boring! I had decided to read it because the rating was so good. I'll keep going for another couple of chapters, but if this continues it will be moved to my DNF shelf.
