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This sounded interesting but I am confronted with way too many commas in its VERY FIRST SENTENCE. It could have been broken up into sentences. My eyes glazed over and my interest waned.
I took a peek at the second sentence. It was an abuse of semicolons.
— Oct 13, 2015 11:02PM
I took a peek at the second sentence. It was an abuse of semicolons.
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