Tamara’s Reviews > The Bee Sting > Status Update
Tamara
is 15% done
loved the first section, perfect. the switch to PJ's perspective (her younger brother) is...not great, weird.
— Feb 08, 2024 01:17PM
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Tamara
is 80% done
this book on e-book says it's 1000 pages and that's upsetting me. the following updated rankings:
Cass POV/elaine/sarah, friend content: 100% cool fun exciting riveting - just now getting back to it, should've been the whole book
younger brother: hard pass
mom past: fairly riveting
mom present: zzzz
dad past: nope
dad present: even more nope
— Feb 10, 2024 09:59PM
Cass POV/elaine/sarah, friend content: 100% cool fun exciting riveting - just now getting back to it, should've been the whole book
younger brother: hard pass
mom past: fairly riveting
mom present: zzzz
dad past: nope
dad present: even more nope
Tamara
is 50% done
ok i've come around to imelda's POV except for the lack of sentence separation. she's like a faulkner character almost. this book is in heavy need of an editor
— Feb 09, 2024 06:39PM
Tamara
is 30% done
oh i see, we're gonna get the POV from every member of the family. noooo, Cass' is the only good one.
— Feb 09, 2024 06:51AM

