Briar’s Reviews > Δάιος: A Call Me Icarus Novel > Status Update

I hate being critical of indie books. I bought it for a reason and I want to be supportive, however, I just read the first chapter and the grammatical mistakes are so distracting 😣

Pg 8 “When he’s done packing he hands be the backpack.” I think it is supposed to say ’me’.

Pg 10 “…, the door loom over us.”

Pg 11 “My eyes drift to his throat where is throat bobs.” Very strange wording.