Julia’s Reviews > Unravel Me > Status Update

okay the first two of these i had no notes. they were perfect.
this one is a little rough. the first time he meets her kid, the baby calls him dada?? why?
not to mention adam spending all of one second before saying “it doesn’t matter to me, now i get two for the price of one” when she tells him connor’s her son??
it’s just…rushed and sloppy for no reason??