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genuine question: why are elena armas’s romances so (unnecessarily) long?
Feb 10, 2024 10:17AM
The Long Game (Green Oak, #1)

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“Now that you have stopped bitching for a minute, can you please unlock the door?”

the male lead did not just say that to the woman he’s supposed to be falling in love with—
Feb 11, 2024 02:23AM
The Long Game (Green Oak, #1)


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message 1: by el (last edited Feb 10, 2024 11:03AM) (new) - rated it 2 stars

el mitra wrote: "wait how long is this one 😭 but exactly!! romances should be short and sweet, and there are rare occasions in which an adult romcom needs to be sooooo long. i think the only reason i can come up wi..."

480 pgs, paperback! i switched to an audiobook (1.8x) so i can do other things while i listen to it, but it still feels like i’ve been stuck with it forever 😭

imo her editor needs to help her cut down unnecessary scenes / have her scenes accomplish more than just one aspect (character dev / relationship dev / plot etc.) to move the story forward, but alas… i guess that’s just her style


message 2: by el (new) - rated it 2 stars

el mitra wrote: "FOUR HUNDRED AND EIGHTY PAGES"

❕ ❕ ❕


message 3: by el (new) - rated it 2 stars

el mitra wrote: "respectfully what was she thinking ?"

i wish i could tell you!!! maybe it’ll all make sense to me when i’ve finished the book 🥲


message 4: by adira (new)

adira it gives her time to trick people into thinking it’s worth the money i guess


message 5: by adira (new)

adira actually came across this in a bookstore. you won’t believe it. 20 fucking dollars! AND ON SALE. i shed some tears that day.


cate asking the real questions


message 7: by el (new) - rated it 2 stars

el adira wrote: "it gives her time to trick people into thinking it’s worth the money i guess"

sdjfnkd;a i—


message 8: by el (new) - rated it 2 stars

el adira wrote: "actually came across this in a bookstore. you won’t believe it. 20 fucking dollars! AND ON SALE. i shed some tears that day."

t w e n t y dollars?? and on s a l e?? 😭😭😭


message 9: by el (new) - rated it 2 stars

el cate ₊˚⊹♡ wrote: "asking the real questions"

😌 always


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