Jackie’s Reviews > Spells for Forgetting > Status Update

I have beef with Adrienne Young's editor. Why am I reading this and editing in my head? Here's a sentence from an early chapter: "A cloud of pigeons descended on the deck as the crowd thinned, scrambling underfoot for whatever crumbs had been left behind, I pulled my hood up over my hat and the metal staircase rocked as I took the steps down to the dock." Like?? Babe please get a new editor.