Johnny’s Reviews > The Reluctant Hotwufe > Status Update
Johnny
is 49% done
The apparel for the second night of clubbing, first with any serious interest in considering other men, was a little over the top and hard to believe. Reads like the wife will expose herself unless she's standing perfectly upright. I think, she's going from fervently opposed to curious too quickly.
— Feb 13, 2024 07:09AM
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Johnny
is 65% done
Didn't like the wife at first, now I don't mind her because the reluctant curiosity is well done.
— Feb 13, 2024 11:00PM
Johnny
is 44% done
Still building tension but in a better, less selfish manner. Giving in to her husband's fantasy? Of course... It would be insulting to the reader of she didn't.
— Feb 13, 2024 06:59AM
Johnny
is 12% done
She may be reluctant but damn is she a selfish character. Nagging at her husband to do something on his birthday, promising to do anything he wants. Then trying to make him feel guilty about what he picks, staying home and doing nothing.
— Feb 13, 2024 06:22AM
