Tara Mcmillan’s Reviews > Mounted And Marked 3 > Status Update

A lot of pronoun typos. It's bad enough when you use "him" instead of "his", but it's even worse when you have feminine pronouns thrown in! The worst is feminine pronouns popping up in the three-male-sex-scene! I'm so distracted by this poor editing that I lose the mood of the scene! Grrr...!