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This book suffers from telling not showing. These last few pages felt like reading a boring textbook.
— Feb 21, 2024 11:17AM
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is on page 82 of 274
Really struggling with the writing. There were so many unnecessary details that added nothing to the story or characters.
— Feb 25, 2024 04:57PM
