Jennie’s Reviews > Eoin's Forbidden Mate > Status Update
Jennie
is 35% done
This whole series needs some editing help … silly things like having out instead of our to larger issues - like in this book where Eion is hesitant to tell Hunter that Kent is human but about ten pages earlier he already mentioned it in a text. It’s little things like this that bring me out of the story when you come across them - and it happens fairly frequently.
— Feb 22, 2024 11:15PM
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