Anna Goerlitz’s Reviews > Zach's Secret > Status Update
Anna Goerlitz
is 50% done
How can a first person narrative not be emotional at all? This is more like a bland telling of events that happened.
This is high school! There is bullying, there is a first boyfriend, there is friends betraying him. Come on, feel something for gods sake!
— Nov 01, 2015 12:54PM
This is high school! There is bullying, there is a first boyfriend, there is friends betraying him. Come on, feel something for gods sake!
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Anna Goerlitz
is 75% done
I feel kind of sad! This had so much potential... but where are the feels?????
— Nov 02, 2015 05:44AM
Anna Goerlitz
is 10% done
Such a poor choice for narrator. This is a high school romance told in the first person. You need a young voice, bot someone who sounds like he's 40+
— Nov 01, 2015 02:53AM
