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Feb 27, 2024 02:58PM
If this was on Kindle I might give it a read.
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Steven wrote: "If this was on Kindle I might give it a read."Really I don't think is worth it. The story is kind of a mess. It has a good idea going but execution leaves a lot to be desire, so far the author is trying to do to much without working on a solid base. The events get to be really confusion, and the character don't know what role they are playing. Is like the author got ideas while writing and inserted them in the work without consideration of how it affects the plot already going on.
Steven wrote: "Thanks for the clarification."Your welcome.