Jennifer Hajdics’s Reviews > Caught in the Middle > Status Update
Jennifer Hajdics
is 8% done
So she just says yes to a threesome with her two best friends. No think about how it could impact their friendship or anything? Right.
— Nov 06, 2015 06:51AM
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Jennifer Hajdics
is 11% done
So, he just starts flogging someone with no BDSM experience without explanation? Plus, this is the middle of a threesome sex scene and I just yawned. Strike 3! DNF!
— Nov 06, 2015 06:59AM
Jennifer Hajdics
is 10% done
"Drew my ire?" Seriously? I hate it when authors try too hard with their writing. I know what it means but in this setting it doesn't fit. KISS: Keep It Simple Stupid.
— Nov 06, 2015 06:55AM
Jennifer Hajdics
is 3% done
Straight off, I'm irritated. Who are these people? The author writes as if we're expected to know who everyone is, how they know each other and what their relationship is. In not a fucking mindreader! Strike one!
— Nov 06, 2015 06:38AM
