Alannah’s Reviews > Deadly Awakening > Status Update
 
  
    
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      is 61% done
    
    
    
      Based on the synopsis, it sounds like a good story but, overall, I found it a little lacking. There is quite a bit that is not very weel explained, why Ben remembers some things and not others, it's all kind of brushed away and not given much of a detailed explanation.
The chapters are short, making for a nice quick read, but the whole story is a little jumpy. Things really pick up after the first 20 chapters.
    
      — Feb 29, 2024 04:30PM
    
  The chapters are short, making for a nice quick read, but the whole story is a little jumpy. Things really pick up after the first 20 chapters.
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