north’s Reviews > The Overnight Guest > Status Update

I hate being nitpicky usually, but the author keeps making certain word choices that just throw me out of the flow of the story. Like saying that it was obvious a car driving on the snow had zigzagged across the “field” which meant they were having a hard time staying on the road. A road is not a field? What?

Also I’m pretty sure I already know what’s happening, which is a little disappointing.