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Chris, the Dalek King
is 17% done
This amnesia thing is so stupid. I mean, I dislike amnesia subplots when characters actually have "amnesia" (or the stupid fictional version of it). But a story where the MC is trying to lie about having amnesia...but isn't even putting in the effort to half-ass it, is just tedious. I don't blame the dude for not believing her. A fifth grader would call bullshit on this.
— Mar 10, 2024 05:26PM
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Chris, the Dalek King
is 21% done
"An overwhelming sorrow for her and all young girls fell upon me."
You just said you were six months older than her. Stop talking like you are some wise elder. Especially since you act like you have the maturity of a 13 year old.
Which, actually is not great since this is a romance story and who knows how old this dude is supposed to be.
— Mar 10, 2024 05:50PM
You just said you were six months older than her. Stop talking like you are some wise elder. Especially since you act like you have the maturity of a 13 year old.
Which, actually is not great since this is a romance story and who knows how old this dude is supposed to be.
Chris, the Dalek King
is 19% done
Why, for the love of all the fucks, would she get dressed in a freaking 19th century dress and then go on a nice morning run??????????????
YOU ARE PRETENDING TO BE A NOBLE LADY IN EARLY 1800'S ENGLAND.
— Mar 10, 2024 05:38PM
YOU ARE PRETENDING TO BE A NOBLE LADY IN EARLY 1800'S ENGLAND.
Chris, the Dalek King
is 16% done
"I tore out five drawings and hid them in my wardrobe. In doing so, I felt like I had cut open my own flesh. I had never damaged my artwork, and it felt wrong."
Oh my gods, woman. You removed a sketch from a sketch book. You didn't tear it to pieces and set it on fire. It is still perfectly fine.
— Mar 10, 2024 05:13PM
Oh my gods, woman. You removed a sketch from a sketch book. You didn't tear it to pieces and set it on fire. It is still perfectly fine.
Chris, the Dalek King
is 13% done
A) She knows she is in the past
B) She has some awareness that class structures are very important here
C) Going up to someone in the hospitality sector in modern times and going "God, I'd hate to have your job! It's so demeaning!" would still be an asshole thing to do.
So why the fuck would she go around talking to a 19th century maid like they are gal pals out a brunch and bitch session?
— Mar 10, 2024 05:00PM
B) She has some awareness that class structures are very important here
C) Going up to someone in the hospitality sector in modern times and going "God, I'd hate to have your job! It's so demeaning!" would still be an asshole thing to do.
So why the fuck would she go around talking to a 19th century maid like they are gal pals out a brunch and bitch session?
