Lani’s Reviews > Anything for Her > Status Update

This is a slog. The writing is amateurish and clunky. I don't understand the lack of story editing. Why does the first sentence of every chapter start with the POV character's name? There are a myriad of other ways to indicate POV. Now a cop is interviewing a child alone?! And the constant annoying references to "that night". This is becoming a hate read.