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I’m so confused how this book got picked up for traditional publishing, got delayed for months, yet reads like it never went through a single edit???
I loved the first book in this series but this one read very… amateur. The story pacing was strange and the prose was clunky and repetitive.
— Mar 14, 2024 04:04PM
I loved the first book in this series but this one read very… amateur. The story pacing was strange and the prose was clunky and repetitive.
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