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I wrapped my arms around her neck, and she wrapped hers around mine as we each buried our faces in each other’s necks



Two questions. One: how can TWO people wrap their arms around one another's neck? (Just...what?) And two: how can they then proceed to bury their face in said area? (Ya know...because their arms around around the neck area and all??)

k uh...the author just suddenly switched from using present tense to past???

I try to be a good boy, I work hard in school getting good grades

Good grades...in kindergarten??

I dislike POVs written from a child's perspective because, as is often the case, author's can't write them for shit. And this is one author who definitely can't.