Laurie McKane’s Reviews > Three Births > Status Update
Laurie McKane
is on page 40 of 63
“(for example, my torso in general is lacking in “practicality”).
Lisa Robertson said ‘the poem is a hormone’
hey, I wish then at least I could swallow it.
Yes I am afraid of being cut open, but not so afraid I won’t just do it.
Self-love is like sky writing,
it is me: I am the embarrassed theme
obsessing over torsos in this chair
always giving language a second chance.
— Mar 18, 2024 01:30PM
Lisa Robertson said ‘the poem is a hormone’
hey, I wish then at least I could swallow it.
Yes I am afraid of being cut open, but not so afraid I won’t just do it.
Self-love is like sky writing,
it is me: I am the embarrassed theme
obsessing over torsos in this chair
always giving language a second chance.
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Laurie’s Previous Updates
Laurie McKane
is on page 35 of 63
“I loved other people more than myself, for a while that was lesbian.”
— Mar 18, 2024 01:26PM
Laurie McKane
is on page 22 of 63
“All this rumoured honesty: I’d make such a decent saint! Flapping from one so-called gender to the next. Moving on the fucking wing. Each breath of mine a private miracle. Moist! Actually I’m better than a decent saint, I am a small, bossy son of God.”
— Mar 18, 2024 01:24PM
Laurie McKane
is on page 19 of 63
“For a few heartbeats I am a total prince. Scars on my chest like his red carnations!
Noise sealed up. Touch my own skin like a lover might.
Without disassociation, a lump in my own throat.”
— Mar 18, 2024 01:19PM
Noise sealed up. Touch my own skin like a lover might.
Without disassociation, a lump in my own throat.”
Laurie McKane
is on page 19 of 63
“but wow it feels good to be obvious after years of misery, mystery, misery, mystery.”
— Mar 18, 2024 01:17PM
Laurie McKane
is on page 18 of 63
“I’m trying to resist the temptation to say, ‘If you don’t believe me I’ll prove it.’ Whatever! I hang in the air like a rumour.
Things I practice saying in the mirror: that’s the difference between you and me! / I know how to hang in
the air like a rumour! / How boring for you! / To be
nothing but a fact on legs!”
— Mar 18, 2024 01:12PM
Things I practice saying in the mirror: that’s the difference between you and me! / I know how to hang in
the air like a rumour! / How boring for you! / To be
nothing but a fact on legs!”

