Eros’s Reviews > Twilight of Embers > Status Update

It’s okay I guess, the plot is interesting and the fmc is cool. But idk it’s giving yn fanfic 2010’s era writing. Everytime one of the mmc’s described her was such an eye roll everytime “Short, tiny, weak, dainty girl that i have to protect.” What’s with the mean girl subplot? Cant women support women in these stories? Idk Imma finish this story but idk if I’ll read the sequels. TLDR; Very Cheesy