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I really liked it. But I think the writing wasn't so awesome as The idea of the storyline. There was too many monologues and repetitions. I love Parker but "he" repeated a lot of things. Besides, the end felt rushed because they were on their last date and then... straight to The Epilogue. It could have been better developed, but The idea is good.
Nov 28, 2015 06:54PM
Confessions of a Heartbreaker

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I'm enjoying it so far. It's pretty good and Parker can be hilarious
Nov 27, 2015 02:04PM
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