Elena’s Reviews > The Secret Ingredient of Wishes > Status Update
Elena
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The premise is good, that your reality depends on what you wish for, it depends on how you think - good or bad things will come back at you, like a mirror.
One thing that annoys me is that every 5 sentences there's a mention to the brother she lost. Every paragraph's action is interrupted by the same repetitive thought ever and ever again.
— Mar 31, 2024 11:51AM
One thing that annoys me is that every 5 sentences there's a mention to the brother she lost. Every paragraph's action is interrupted by the same repetitive thought ever and ever again.
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Elena
is on page 261 of 304
Getting closer to the end, the mystery is unveiling and is getting solved. There are optimist moments that make it a nice read.
Although questions in every paragraph are not stopping. Literal questions in Rachel's mind "how could she do this now?" Or "what happened to her brother". Every paragraph? We don't need that reminder. It's just annoying and stops the flow. so. Many. Times.
— Apr 05, 2024 06:21AM
Although questions in every paragraph are not stopping. Literal questions in Rachel's mind "how could she do this now?" Or "what happened to her brother". Every paragraph? We don't need that reminder. It's just annoying and stops the flow. so. Many. Times.
