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This chapter is irritating me, because it’s quite a tender moment for Nora and Charlie, but if Nora could stop acting like a horny teen for 2 seconds, I’d actually enjoy the tenderness.

The physical aspect almost feels…forced. Because it doesn’t fit here. This a serious, emotional conversation. It feels like Henry put it in just to keep the readers attention, like it was an obligation.

I knew there was a reason I didn’t like Libby. She’s very neurotypical. It’s clear that Nora has an anxiety disorder and is neurotic about her work. Libby sounds like the sheltered kid who’s upset her sister isn’t exactly like her.

Finally a male lead that isn’t a total ass!