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north
is 72% done
“Once you start the magic, you can’t stop it so be careful because it can kill you. But not you, Eragon, you can totally stop using magic before it kills you without any sort of explanation as to why you can do it but nobody else can 🙃”
— Apr 03, 2024 09:10AM
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north
is 67% done
There are good bones here, but the story is fairly juvenile and meanders far too much. Also the magic system is extremely inconsistent. I do not believe someone could actually lift hundreds of gallons of water from deep in the ground
— Apr 03, 2024 07:51AM
