Linda’s Reviews > Assistant to the Villain > Status Update

Oh but for a good editor this would be a very fun read! I love the premise and the characters. I love the plot, the narrative. The banter is a little bit off sometimes, but the thing tripping me up is nonsense sentences. I keep having to read sentences over, and rewrite them in my head to make sense. Misplaced modifiers, unclear narration, etc. An important piece of world bldg alluded to pages before it was given.