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This had a lot of wasted potential. I liked how the story started with the whole kidnapped kid thing, which was refreshing and different but half way through it was completely neglected.
The whole interaction between the main characters was purely sexual and there wasn’t much plot outside of it. And no real emotional or otherwise depth.
— Apr 14, 2024 02:27PM
This had a lot of wasted potential. I liked how the story started with the whole kidnapped kid thing, which was refreshing and different but half way through it was completely neglected.
The whole interaction between the main characters was purely sexual and there wasn’t much plot outside of it. And no real emotional or otherwise depth.
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They tried to make it seem like an emotional experience but it’s just a blow job like relax. And when she said daddy they completely lost me. I didn’t really believe their chemistry and calling this a hockey romance is just plain wrong. I had to force myself to continue reading it and I DNFd it at 67%
— Apr 14, 2024 02:27PM
They tried to make it seem like an emotional experience but it’s just a blow job like relax. And when she said daddy they completely lost me. I didn’t really believe their chemistry and calling this a hockey romance is just plain wrong. I had to force myself to continue reading it and I DNFd it at 67%
