Elithanathile’s Reviews > One Step Further > Status Update

// Do you not say bye when you finish a phone conversation?!! What's with all the aggressive "clicking off"?!! This author must think this way, which again, makes her so fucking unlikeable and insufferable in her writing here and in general!!!!

// Ah the irony!!! This author though it'd be funny to jab at one of her previous MCs by correcting his grammar and referencing illiteracy, when SHE, the author herself, is the most grammatically illiterate and ignorant of all!! Shut the fuck up, author, with your glib and holier than thou bullshit!!! First learn how NOT to come across as ignorant, illiterate, and idiotic, before anything else!!! Just fucking STOP!!!

// It is ALEX'S RESPONSIBILITY to speak up if he has something to say!!! DO NOT FUCKING WEAPONIZE FRIENDSHIP!! Your friend isn't selfish if you never let him know what you're going through; he is not a fucking mind reader!!! Fucking hell!! This is insight into the author!! She thinks this way which is why she writes this way and it comes across as cunt-like, toxic, ignorant, obnoxious, and manipulative as fuck here!!

// This author is really irritating me! Why the fuck does the MC have to besmirch his BFF in his narration, saying he had a fucked up life (in the past), that he was selfish, and didn't notice that the MC also has issues!! First, AUTHOR, shut the fuck up and keep stop dragging previous MCs who got their HEAs into current stories, STOP creating CUNT characters who badmouth friends!! This author acts cunt-like!! STOP!!

// Rafe needs to cut that "mother" off and completely eliminate, erase, and eradicate her from his life!!! PERMANENTLY!!!!!!!

// NO!!!! I loathe when authors encourage toxic familial bonds just because "they're family"!! It just tells me how ludicrously obnoxious, ignorant. problematic, intolerable, and obnoxious these authors must be in real life!! Enough with the garbage already!! NO!! There is NO bond and they treated Rafe like shit, they are NOT family just because they shared DNA!! Rafe, stop being a doormat and eliminate the ties!!!!!

// Anyway, moving on from a MASSIVE pet peeve!!!!

// GOOD LORD!!! THE SENTENCE IS: "COULD NOT HAVE CARED LESS"!!! THE WORD "NOT" IS CRITICAL TO THE WHOLE POINT OF THE SENTENCE!!! THIS AUTHOR SHOULD KNOW GRAMMAR AND SHE USED TO BE IN THE LEGAL PROFESSION, WHICH BASED ON HER WRITING I FIND ABSOLUTELY BAFFLING AND QUESTIONABLE, BUT THE FACT IS SHE SHOULD KNOW FUCKING BETTER!!! THIS AUTHOR NEEDS TO SERIOUSLY STOP BEING SO GRAMMATICALLY IGNORANT AND FUCKING OBNOXIOUS!!!!

// In the mood of a reread for this, so here we go!!!