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So, I'm assuming Emma is the main character considering we get her POV first, and we get more of it, but we're halfway through and I really can't see how these characters are going to connect.

Their story lines aren't occurring concurrently, since when we start with Maggie, she's only 12 years old, and now she's 16. Emma's storyline is more detailed.

At first I thought maybe Maggie might be Emma's mum, but not sure
Apr 16, 2024 11:07PM
Emerald of the Sea (The Alayan Series, # 1)

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Lesley Barklay
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Okay, so Emma gave Hugo the locket, so that confirms my theory that Marchand is Hugo, and that Maggie is Emma's mother.

It's an interesting narrative choice to tell the story this way. I'm not sure how I feel about it, although if we'd done it chronologically we wouldn't have all of Emma's questions drawing us along through the narrative. Maggie's story is much slower paced, so this was probably the right way to go.
Apr 17, 2024 02:38AM
Emerald of the Sea (The Alayan Series, # 1)


Lesley Barklay
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Another prediction. I think Hugo might be Captain Marchand. At first I thought he might be Emma's father, then it was said that her father was a dangerous man, so now I'm wondering if Mags was maybe forced to marry someone else, and that man is Emma's dad.

But I'm not sure from the blurb, since it makes it seem like the two girls meet up. I guess, perhaps, that might refer to Emma meeting her adult mother?
Apr 16, 2024 11:17PM
Emerald of the Sea (The Alayan Series, # 1)


Lesley Barklay
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I'm definitely intrigued, though. I'm loving both of these characters (and their love interests, although I feel like perhaps Charlie knows a lot more than he's letting on).

I'm having to take an emotional break at the moment, since I really don't want Maggie and Hugo to go down the miscommunication route, when they're both clearly keen on one another. Awkwardness isn't cute when it leads to jealousy and avoidance.
Apr 16, 2024 11:09PM
Emerald of the Sea (The Alayan Series, # 1)


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